Comments on: The Rose Peddler: Unhappy Ending

By: Strata

Strata — Sat, 28 May 2011 01:06:08 +0000

nice…… i read both of the endings but i like this one more

By: Kelli

Kelli — Wed, 18 May 2011 23:37:40 +0000

I KNEW IT! someone would die, and it HAD to be ROSE!( although i DID think, while reading, that he would slowly find out that he was insane):l

By: Enitan

Enitan — Sun, 06 Mar 2011 20:48:55 +0000

Haha, I like the unhappy one better. Nice stories . . . I wrote one, but it’s not “school appropriet”. it was about some dude and how he started going insane, and saw a raven that followed him home, till at some point he accidently displaced his brains, and splattered his guts and insides all over the sidewalk. i wrote it for some school project . . . Lol but that was when i was in fourth grade . . . (XD not jk’ing. My imagination has always been a little . . . Diseased.)

By: Ai Xiao Hong

Ai Xiao Hong — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 03:42:21 +0000

Wow. This is so beautifully written. Cutis. You seize to amaze me. I see alot of similarities in our writing. We both have a dark side to our minds~! I really enjoyed the ending. Raymond finally gave in to the face he had lost his love. Also, the joke on the tombstone giving him a bit of comfort was very sweet.

By: BeckyW

BeckyW — Sat, 08 Aug 2009 05:15:16 +0000

I read both endings and I must say that, though they were both very good, I definitely liked this one better. It was really unexpected, and it shows how deeply Raymond loved Rose.
…Haha, or maybe I just have a taste for unhappy endings.
Anyway, great story. =) I definitely want to read more of your stories.

By: Quilleran

Quilleran — Wed, 01 Jul 2009 03:30:59 +0000

Wow, an epic ending. Deffinetly not the normal same old same old plot twist. The unhappy ending is much more exciting it think!

By: Mandieville666

Mandieville666 — Sun, 28 Jun 2009 10:53:54 +0000

so it was all an hallucination brought on by grief.

By: Frankenmegan

Frankenmegan — Sun, 28 Jun 2009 06:21:32 +0000

Oh wow, totally NOT the expected ending. But that was good and caught me completely off guard.

By: Lillian T.

Lillian T. — Sat, 27 Jun 2009 06:09:55 +0000

And of course she ends up dead… Although I do like the fact that her tombstone brought a tiny bit of happiness to him. Misspelled flower…that’s what I should have on my tombstone. A bunch of misspelled words.

By: The Rose Peddler

The Rose Peddler — Thu, 25 Jun 2009 23:28:59 +0000

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